Before I talk about what parts you might consider improving, I would first like to say that I liked the topic of your presentation; it was about something that I had heard of but did not know. The opening was good as well. However I think it would have been a little more effective if you had asked the question first, then say "today I am going to introduce about ~". While I like the structure and the organization of your presentation, I would like to point out that it would have been much easier to understand if you had used your voice more strategically. Some stressing and pacing, and chunking, most of all, would have made a huge difference. For me it was quite hard to catch up, because it wasn't so clear to hear and the speed was a little too fast. In the part where you showed the visuals to your audience, using a bigger, more visible one would definitely help. However I did like this part because I could see the communication you were making with the audience. Lastly, another thing I would like to point out is the place where you gave the presentation. I felt it wasn't so appropriate, with all the sounds ringing.
Before I talk about what parts you might consider improving, I would first like to say that I liked the topic of your presentation; it was about something that I had heard of but did not know. The opening was good as well. However I think it would have been a little more effective if you had asked the question first, then say "today I am going to introduce about ~".
ReplyDeleteWhile I like the structure and the organization of your presentation, I would like to point out that it would have been much easier to understand if you had used your voice more strategically. Some stressing and pacing, and chunking, most of all, would have made a huge difference. For me it was quite hard to catch up, because it wasn't so clear to hear and the speed was a little too fast.
In the part where you showed the visuals to your audience, using a bigger, more visible one would definitely help. However I did like this part because I could see the communication you were making with the audience.
Lastly, another thing I would like to point out is the place where you gave the presentation. I felt it wasn't so appropriate, with all the sounds ringing.
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