Title : Community Service Evaluator : EunYoung Kim Date : 12/02
• Topic Selection: __Facilitated vocal variety _v_Satisfactory __Could Improve • Volume: __Excellent _v_Satisfactory __Too loud or soft • Rate: __Excellent, varied __Satisfactory _v_Too fast or too slow • Pitch: __Varied conversational __Satisfactory _v_Monotonous, artificial • Quality: __Pleasant, friendly _v_Satisfactory __Harsh, monotonous • Pauses: _v_Appropriate, effective __Satisfactory __Could Improve • Expressiveness: __Conveyed emotion, meaning __Satisfactory _v_Could Improve • Vocal Variety: __Enhanced speech _v_Satisfactory __Could Improve • Organization: __Logical flow of ideas _v_Satisfactory __Should Improve • Word Usage: _v_Vivid, descriptive, accurate __Satisfactory __Could Improve • Body Language: __Natural, expressive __Satisfactory _v_Unnatural, distracting
• What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective? I could have used more hand gestures and spoken in a more expressive way. My speaking rate could also have been a bit faster.
• What did you like about the speech? I liked that it was based on my own experience related to the topic.
Speaking Feedback Date : 12/3 Speaker: Eunyoung Kim Evaluator: Mijeong Lim Title : Community Service
1. What strong points does the speaker have? Her voice is easy to listen and materials are helpful to understand her speech. 2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject? Audience could learn importance of community service. 3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation? Yes. 4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly? Yes. 5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion? Yes. Audience can grasp the structure of her speech. 6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact. It would be better if she saw audience more. 7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech? I suggest that she has more confidence. 8. What did you like about the presentation? I like her soft voice and the speed of utterance.
Title : Community Service
ReplyDeleteEvaluator : EunYoung Kim
Date : 12/02
• Topic Selection: __Facilitated vocal variety _v_Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Volume: __Excellent _v_Satisfactory __Too loud or soft
• Rate: __Excellent, varied __Satisfactory _v_Too fast or too slow
• Pitch: __Varied conversational __Satisfactory _v_Monotonous, artificial
• Quality: __Pleasant, friendly _v_Satisfactory __Harsh, monotonous
• Pauses: _v_Appropriate, effective __Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Expressiveness: __Conveyed emotion, meaning __Satisfactory _v_Could Improve
• Vocal Variety: __Enhanced speech _v_Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Organization: __Logical flow of ideas _v_Satisfactory __Should Improve
• Word Usage: _v_Vivid, descriptive, accurate __Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Body Language: __Natural, expressive __Satisfactory _v_Unnatural, distracting
• What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
I could have used more hand gestures and spoken in a more expressive way. My speaking rate could also have been a bit faster.
• What did you like about the speech?
I liked that it was based on my own experience related to the topic.
Speaking Feedback
ReplyDeleteDate : 12/3
Speaker: Eunyoung Kim
Evaluator: Mijeong Lim
Title : Community Service
1. What strong points does the speaker have? Her voice is easy to listen and materials are helpful to understand her speech.
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
Audience could learn importance of community service.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
Yes.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
Yes.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
Yes. Audience can grasp the structure of her speech.
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
It would be better if she saw audience more.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
I suggest that she has more confidence.
8. What did you like about the presentation?
I like her soft voice and the speed of utterance.