I know that she has prepared a lot, and her effort was paid off in her presentation. I can see that she remembered most of her lines, and was passionate in her speech. The content was also educational; considering that most of the audience will be Koreans, it was suitable and interesting. Content itself was well-organized, too. But it would have been much better if the speech was more 'fluent'. I saw many pauses in where I thought was inappropriate places to pause. It ruined the flow a bit, and I wasn't sure if she was emphasizing or not. Giving a clear difference would be better.
I know that she has prepared a lot, and her effort was paid off in her presentation. I can see that she remembered most of her lines, and was passionate in her speech. The content was also educational; considering that most of the audience will be Koreans, it was suitable and interesting. Content itself was well-organized, too.
ReplyDeleteBut it would have been much better if the speech was more 'fluent'. I saw many pauses in where I thought was inappropriate places to pause. It ruined the flow a bit, and I wasn't sure if she was emphasizing or not. Giving a clear difference would be better.