Speaking Feedback Date : 12/01 Speaker: Yijoon Kim Evaluator: Yijoon Kim Title : What changed my life
1. What strong points does the speaker have? I gave quite a lot of gestures for the audience not to be bored talking with clear voice. 2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject? The audience could understand my life and the moment, the turning point of my life very well. 3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation? Yes. 4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly? Yes. 5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion? Yes. 6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact. It is enough to interact with the audience. 7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech? It would be even better if I used visual aids even though it was my own episode and narrative presentation. 8. What did you like about the presentation? It is still not enough to be a perfect presentaion, but my gestures and eye contact are quite improved through this presentation than before. And I think my facial expression was properly added.
Speaking Feedback Date : 12/3 Speaker: Yijun Kim Evaluator: Mijeong Lim Title : What Changed My Life
1. What strong points does the speaker have? She speaks taking right posture and loudly. 2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject? Audience could learn how her life has changed by what events. 3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation? Yes. 4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly? Yes. 5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion? Yes. Audience can grasp the structure of her speech. 6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact. She is trying to have more eye contacts with audience and it is quite effective for her speech. 7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech? I suggest that she 8. What did you like about the presentation? I like her clear voice and eye contacts.
Speaking Feedback
ReplyDeleteDate : 12/01
Speaker: Yijoon Kim
Evaluator: Yijoon Kim
Title : What changed my life
1. What strong points does the speaker have?
I gave quite a lot of gestures for the audience not to be bored talking with clear voice.
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
The audience could understand my life and the moment, the turning point of my life very well.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
Yes.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
Yes.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
Yes.
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
It is enough to interact with the audience.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
It would be even better if I used visual aids even though it was my own episode and narrative presentation.
8. What did you like about the presentation?
It is still not enough to be a perfect presentaion, but my gestures and eye contact are quite improved through this presentation than before. And I think my facial expression was properly added.
Title : What changed my life
ReplyDeleteEvaluator : EunYoung Kim
Date : 12/02
• Topic Selection: __Facilitated vocal variety _v_Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Volume: _v_Excellent __Satisfactory __Too loud or soft
• Rate: __Excellent, varied _v_Satisfactory __Too fast or too slow
• Pitch: _v_Varied conversational __Satisfactory __Monotonous, artificial
• Quality: _v_Pleasant, friendly __Satisfactory __Harsh, monotonous
• Pauses: __Appropriate, effective _v_Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Expressiveness: _v_Conveyed emotion, meaning __Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Vocal Variety: _v_Enhanced speech __Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Organization: __Logical flow of ideas _v_Satisfactory __Should Improve
• Word Usage: __Vivid, descriptive, accurate _v_Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Body Language: __Natural, expressive _v_Satisfactory __Unnatural, distracting
• What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
She could have used some visual aids in the presentation.
• What did you like about the speech?
I liked her overall tone and how expressive she was regarding her experience.
Speaking Feedback
ReplyDeleteDate : 12/3
Speaker: Yijun Kim
Evaluator: Mijeong Lim
Title : What Changed My Life
1. What strong points does the speaker have?
She speaks taking right posture and loudly.
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
Audience could learn how her life has changed by what events.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
Yes.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
Yes.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
Yes. Audience can grasp the structure of her speech.
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
She is trying to have more eye contacts with audience and it is quite effective for her speech.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
I suggest that she
8. What did you like about the presentation?
I like her clear voice and eye contacts.