After watching my presentation, the first thing I noticed was me looking at my notes too much. I think it would have been better if I had memorized more parts of my speech beforehand. Also, I realized that my speech would have been a bit more descriptive and persuasive if I had prepared some visuals through Powerpoint.
Speaking Feedback Date : 10/19 Speaker: Eunyoung Kim Evaluator: Mijeong Lim Title : The effect of smile
1. What strong points does the speaker have? Her voice is easy to listen. 2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject? Audience could learn the effect of smile. 3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation? Yes. 4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly? Yes. 5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion? Yes. Audience can grasp the structure of her speech. 6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact. It would be better if she saw audience more. 7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech? I suggest that she speak louder. 8. What did you like about the presentation? I like her interesting topic.
Speaking Feedback Date : 10/23 Speaker: Eunyoung Kim Evaluator: Yijoon Kim Title : The effect of smile
1. What strong points does the speaker have? Her voice and pronunciation is very clear so that I can understand easily. 2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject? I could learn the effect of smile very well. 3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation? Yes. 4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly? Yes. 5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion? Yes. 6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact. I think it is not enough to grasp the audience. 7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech? If she gave more eye contact, and spoke with variation, it would be better. 8. What did you like about the presentation? She speaks very clearly and calmly, so I can focus on the presentation and understand more easily, which is the part I like.
Speaking Feedback Date : 10/26 Speaker: Eunyoung Kim Evaluator: Sue Min Hwang Title : Effects of smiling
1. What strong points does the speaker have? She had clear voice and pronounciation. 2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject? She started the speech telling us about the overall topic. 3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation? Yes. 4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly? Yes. 5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion? Yes. 6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact. She had some eye contact, but it seemed unnatural. 7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech? By more eye-contact, the speech might have improved. 8. What did you like about the presentation? She had a calm voice which helped me concentrate deeply on her speech.
Self-Evaluation
ReplyDeleteAfter watching my presentation, the first thing I noticed was me looking at my notes too much. I think it would have been better if I had memorized more parts of my speech beforehand. Also, I realized that my speech would have been a bit more descriptive and persuasive if I had prepared some visuals through Powerpoint.
Speaking Feedback
ReplyDeleteDate : 10/19
Speaker: Eunyoung Kim
Evaluator: Mijeong Lim
Title : The effect of smile
1. What strong points does the speaker have? Her voice is easy to listen.
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
Audience could learn the effect of smile.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
Yes.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
Yes.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
Yes. Audience can grasp the structure of her speech.
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
It would be better if she saw audience more.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
I suggest that she speak louder.
8. What did you like about the presentation?
I like her interesting topic.
Speaking Feedback
ReplyDeleteDate : 10/23
Speaker: Eunyoung Kim
Evaluator: Yijoon Kim
Title : The effect of smile
1. What strong points does the speaker have?
Her voice and pronunciation is very clear so that I can understand easily.
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
I could learn the effect of smile very well.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
Yes.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
Yes.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
Yes.
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
I think it is not enough to grasp the audience.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
If she gave more eye contact, and spoke with variation, it would be better.
8. What did you like about the presentation?
She speaks very clearly and calmly, so I can focus on the presentation and understand more easily, which is the part I like.
Speaking Feedback
ReplyDeleteDate : 10/26
Speaker: Eunyoung Kim
Evaluator: Sue Min Hwang
Title : Effects of smiling
1. What strong points does the speaker have?
She had clear voice and pronounciation.
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
She started the speech telling us about the overall topic.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
Yes.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
Yes.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
Yes.
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
She had some eye contact, but it seemed unnatural.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
By more eye-contact, the speech might have improved.
8. What did you like about the presentation?
She had a calm voice which helped me concentrate deeply on her speech.