The speech itself is well-structured, with clear distinction between the reasons of why Mario became popular. Although it was easy to understand, I feel like the reasons could have been more specific. For example, how well did Mario actually sell to be 'popular?' And the speaker's voice could have been a bit clearer - it wasn't too fast or anything, but it was slightly hard to hear what the speaker was saying sometimes.
The speech itself is well-structured, with clear distinction between the reasons of why Mario became popular. Although it was easy to understand, I feel like the reasons could have been more specific. For example, how well did Mario actually sell to be 'popular?' And the speaker's voice could have been a bit clearer - it wasn't too fast or anything, but it was slightly hard to hear what the speaker was saying sometimes.
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