Saturday, October 15, 2016

Seo seung yeon/first assignment/ wed 34

ASSIGNMENT
https://youtu.be/N0NJv22BJck


The assignment video didn't taped audience, so I add one more video that captured audience. They are both taped in same day. But this video is just to confirm audience exist, my assignment is the first video.
Sorry

Video to check the audience

https://youtu.be/SqRHB_mqEN8

2 comments:

  1. The gestures and faces she made had me fully immersed in it. The speed of her speach was very appropriate so that even english starters could understand well. Also the topic she chose was intersting enough for me to hug my friend who was next to me when watching her film.

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  2. Speaking Feedback
    Self-Evaluation
    Speaker: Seo Seung Yeon
    Evaluator: Seo Seung Yeon

    Title: Life Changing Hug

    1. What strong points does the speaker have?
    The story I told was well related to the topic.
    2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?

    The audience could know the exact effects of hug physiologically and realize that it’s true by backup story that proves that hugs really work.

    3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
    Yes, though there was typo in the PPT.

    4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
    Yes. I memorized the speech and tried to deliver my speech which contains some scientific facts with clear diction and relatively slow speed.

    5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
    Yes.

    6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
    I barely looked at the note because I memorized it, so It would have been better to do not hold the note
    Eye contact was good.

    7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
    do not hold the note, correct the typo in the PPT,
    8. What did you like about the presentation?
    The fact that I get to introduce to my audience one of the most meaningful moments of my life, was great.

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