First of all I would like to say that it was a great presentation. You were well prepared, had the lines memorized and you barely looked at your notes. Also it was really engaging when you occasionally showed screens from your laptop. You look confident in your speech and overall it was an interesting topic. You had good body postures, fine vocabullary choices, good pace and pauses.
This was a clear and compelling speech, starting with a shocking statement, moving on to a personal story and even openly expressing the speaker's own vulnerability. The use of the swivel stool was amazing and innovative as well. The only thing I would like to point out is the importance of slowing down. Going towards the end, there are things that should be highly emphasized. I feel that slowing down in places and changing the tone to give power to each word (such as 'empathy') would greatly improve the speech.
Voice is really clear and loud enough to understand and speech is well organized so we could understand what she wants to say easily. Telling her personal experience in her highschool was interesting and her hook was really catch our attention if she makes introduction part more interesting, I think it would be much better.
First of all I would like to say that it was a great presentation. You were well prepared, had the lines memorized and you barely looked at your notes. Also it was really engaging when you occasionally showed screens from your laptop. You look confident in your speech and overall it was an interesting topic. You had good body postures, fine vocabullary choices, good pace and pauses.
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ReplyDeleteThis was a clear and compelling speech, starting with a shocking statement, moving on to a personal story and even openly expressing the speaker's own vulnerability. The use of the swivel stool was amazing and innovative as well. The only thing I would like to point out is the importance of slowing down. Going towards the end, there are things that should be highly emphasized. I feel that slowing down in places and changing the tone to give power to each word (such as 'empathy') would greatly improve the speech.
ReplyDeleteVoice is really clear and loud enough to understand and speech is well organized so we could understand what she wants to say easily. Telling her personal experience in her highschool was interesting and her hook was really catch our attention if she makes introduction part more interesting, I think it would be much better.
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